on the roof
raindrops
splashing
all around
me
pooling
in
puddles
at
my
feet
raindrops
splashing
all around
the tears
of the sky
soak
the ground
so...what do you think of my poetry?
it was originally posted over
here
but I wanted to share it here, too
thoughts? suggestions? critiques?
talk to me, frens
stay beautiful,