pitter patter
on the roof
raindrops
splashing
all around
me
pooling
in
puddles
at
my
feet
the
tears of
the sky
coming
down
in torrents
soaking
the
face
of
the
earth
raindrops
splashing
all around
the tears
of the sky
soak
the ground
so...what do you think of my poetry?
it was originally posted over here
but I wanted to share it here, too
thoughts? suggestions? critiques?
talk to me, frens
stay beautiful,
I love this! Rain in itself is so beautiful, and I love the idea of raindrops being the "tears of the sky"! <3
ReplyDelete-Madeline Joy
Thank you, Madeline! That is what I've always thought of them. :D
DeleteCreative poem... I absolutely love the rain :)
ReplyDeleteI love the rain, too. It's one of my favorite types of weather. :)
DeleteRead this, while listening to the rain come down outside, and it's perfect, Anika! The 1-3 word lines really work to create a "raindrop" feel to the song, with words falling like rain. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ruth!! I'm so glad you like it. That's exactly what I was going for for the "raindrop" feel to it. :D
DeletePoetry and rain? What could be better!?!!
ReplyDeleteRain is also my favorite type of weather :)
ReplyDeleteAlso, sorry I'm commenting so late. I just found your blog through Tower of Joy :)
Deletexx Saige @ randomalley.blogspot.com