19.11.17

raindrops | from a beauty in words



pitter patter
on the roof
raindrops
splashing
all around
me
pooling
in
puddles
at
my
feet


the
tears of
the sky
coming
down
in torrents
soaking
the
face
of
the
earth


raindrops

splashing

all around

the tears

of the sky

soak

the ground


so...what do you think of my poetry?

it was originally posted over here

but I wanted to share it here, too

thoughts? suggestions? critiques?

talk to me, frens


stay  beautiful,

9 comments :

  1. I love this! Rain in itself is so beautiful, and I love the idea of raindrops being the "tears of the sky"! <3

    -Madeline Joy

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    1. Thank you, Madeline! That is what I've always thought of them. :D

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  2. Creative poem... I absolutely love the rain :)

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    1. I love the rain, too. It's one of my favorite types of weather. :)

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  3. Read this, while listening to the rain come down outside, and it's perfect, Anika! The 1-3 word lines really work to create a "raindrop" feel to the song, with words falling like rain. Love it!

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    1. Thanks, Ruth!! I'm so glad you like it. That's exactly what I was going for for the "raindrop" feel to it. :D

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  4. Rain is also my favorite type of weather :)

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    1. Also, sorry I'm commenting so late. I just found your blog through Tower of Joy :)

      xx Saige @ randomalley.blogspot.com

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