pitter patter
on the roof
raindrops
splashing
all around
me
pooling
in
puddles
at
my
feet
the
tears of
the sky
coming
down
in torrents
soaking
the
face
of
the
earth
raindrops
splashing
all around
the tears
of the sky
soak
the ground
so...what do you think of my poetry?
it was originally posted over here
but I wanted to share it here, too
thoughts? suggestions? critiques?
talk to me, frens
stay beautiful,
